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I would like to go to school, as I am doing now. The pupils there would get primari, secondary, and high education. I wish it were a big and comfortable school with mighty windows admitting a lot of light. I also wish there were a big library where with many new books and computers. And there would be a big gym also full of light. There would be training devices and a lot of sports equipment. The students would have their own lockers for their belongings and textbooks. There would also be a big canteen with free meals. I with that only the best teachers taught pupils to write, read, do sums, draw, and encourage good behavior. Pupils would get good education. Surely, there would be free facultative classes at school. There would also be many development groups of pupils. So, it has to be the best ever school with the happiest pupils and teachers who believe it to be their second home!

I want A big and comfortable school... не совсем поняла к чему там that was light
Besides i want A huge library 
where would be new books and computers. there там не нужно.
As it would be desirable a big gym. лучше сказать I also wanted a big gym или I also would like a big gym to be there. 
It has to be bright. 
That at school there were own lockers for things and textbooks.  английские предложения так не строятся. There must be own lockers for things and textbooks можно так употребить. 
Besides, at school have to be a big free dining room. правильнее Besides a big free dining room have to be at school. 
време, а скорее всего нужно употребить they would teach
to good behavior. they would teach a good behavior.
скорее всего не pupils have to get... a- pupils need to get 
free facultative occupations have to be there. 
besides many developing circles for pupils have to be at school. 
as a result school would be the best
this school can be considered as the second house.