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for teachers
official style is the main criterion of teachers. clothes should be simple and tasteful. this is usually a trouser or skirt suit, dress. bright colors and prints should be avoided. pantyhose preferably nude. official business style does not allow loose hair, if they are long. a little better styling or at least beam. hair color should be natural-burnt yellow hair.

for students
according to the rules of business casual dress code for girls is appropriate to wear:
classic trousers, jacket or vest with skirt, classic dress or sundress, light blouse, knitted jumper, business shoes with heels no more than 3-4 cm, possible watch, hair clips or brooch.
unacceptable to wear to school:
jeans, fishnet tights, leggings, shorts, mini-skirts, short tops, transparent and shiny clothes, shoes with very high heels.
according to the rules of business casual dress code for boys is appropriate to wear:
jacket with trousers or suit of the same fabric, shirt; jumper, tie calm colors and patterns, black or brown business shoes with or without laces, socks to match trousers or shoes, thin belt in black or dark brown, discreet business accessories, watches.
unacceptable for a boy in school:
wrinkled shirt, short trousers, the edge of the underwear peeking out from under the belt, distressed fringed jeans.

I would like to tell you about my school life. I go to school 5 times a week. I usually leave my home at 7/45 and arrive to school nearly 8 o'clock. Pupils should wear uniform that is very terrific and modern. I hurry to the cafe for having some brakfast after my first lesson. I enjoy delicious food there. It's a pleasure for me. I get a lot of knowledge at school. When I come home I usually  try to do my homework, and it is not very easy sometimes. But I am required to do it. So, I call my friends to find out the right answer.  I think the most important thing at school is a friendship. I will have fantastic memories about my school life after finishing school. It's a good idea to meet friends and keep in touch with them after graduation. 

I think that my school is the best one. I love it very much. Nearly all our teachers are kind and intelligent and my classmates are smart and friendly. But everybody has a dream. The dream about our new school - the school of the future. Now I would like to tell you a few words about my ideal school. First of all If I were a Headteacher of my school I would allowed everybody to have an opportunity to use one's phone and nobody can require to stop using it. 

The second thing is our homework. So much of it! Don't the teachers know that it is waste of time, our time and theirs. What do you think about this idea?

The next. Our holidays. I would like to travel a lot and find out many interesting things and places and to meet new friends. But when? Our holidays must be a bit longer I think. And at last the equipment of our classrooms! What do we see? There are few computers which we can use. My dream is that every classroom has ten and more new computers with Internet.

And of course there aren't any uniforms!

It's a pleasure to study at school like this. It's school of my dream. Only a good school

can give you great memories.