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school is a place where we get basic knowledge.
i'm in 7th grade
i go there on foot.
my school is a large three-story building that has everything
lessons start at 9am.
in my class 16 people
i have many good friends at school. we study and play together.
at school, we study many different subjects: history, geography, physics, biology, mathematics, russian and literature. we also study foreign languages: english and german.
our cool teacher is very kind and fair. she loves us.
the school has its own dining room where we can have lunch.
our class participates in extracurricular activities,
our class also loves sports.
our teachers are good and patient.
i love to go to school.

1.   Will you go to the library tomorrow? - No, I already was at the library this week. I was there on Monday. As a rule, I am going to the library every Wednesday. But yesterday I didn't go there, because I didn't read the book. I read it now. I will go to the library on Saturday if I finish the book by that time.
2.   As soon as I receive a letter, I shall go to Moscow.
3.  Yesterday I put five apples into the vase.Where they are now? - I ate them.
4.  You ever was to the Hermitage?
5.   What Nick did, when you rang him up yesterday? - He to played the piano.
6.  He to tells me he already wrote his composition.
7.  Why she is sleeping now? It is too early. She never slept at this time.
8.   Will you go for a walk with me? -1 I am sorry, I can't. I do my homework. I don't write the English exercise yet. If you wait for me, I will go with you in half of an hour. I to want to go for a walk very much,because I didn't go for a walk yesterday.
9    Don't go to Nick's place now, he is working. He will finish his homework at 7 o'clock. If you come after 7, he will be very glad. 
10. Pete, will you go to the cinema? - Yes. I think so. 
11. He usually to played in the yard at this time, and now he was there.
12. He read a book at 5o'clock yesterday.
13. Yesterday the children did all their homework before mother came home, and
when she came, they played with the cat.

I've just arrived from London and the trip was amazing! I was at many different places,but the most I've liked was Westminster abbey. If you don't know it's a large,mainly Gothic church. This place was so stunning! It's the traditional place of coronation British monarchs. Our guide told to us many different and interesting stories about the most famous church in London. Actually,the weather wasn't so good,because as you know London is the rainy city. When I came,the sun was shining,but when my holidays began,the weather was awful. All my trip I was travelled on the famous red London bus. I was so happy to see it. Finally! So it was great! You must visit this amazing city,it has many awesome places!Bye!Love you.