Проверьте, исправьте ошибки! ) first of all, let me introduce myself. my name is tanya. i am seventeen years old. i am a first year student of the faculty of economics my family lives in rostov-on-don in one of the residential district. i am proud of my parents and love them. i would like to spend more time with them, but they always seem to be busy. my dad has a full-time. in my free time i go walking with my close friends or fellow students. we attend the theaters, museums, art galleries. i receive many of emails from my friends. on the internet, we discuss latest events, talk a lot about life, about our problems. but now i cant afford to spend much time for entertainment. i'm very busy i usually spend my evenings at home. i read, do my homework, study english. english is a very difficult language. but i hope to master it because it is useful to me in the future. i try to be a diligent and bright student. i enjoy learning, but i get tired after class, and i feel a headache. i want to travel to different countries, but unfortunately i do not have this opportunity now. and the last thing i would like to tell you about things i hope to achieve in my life are: finishing the university, to have a very successful career, to build the home of my dreams and to find someone in my life to share all that with.
2) But I hope to master (я бы сказала to improve - но Ваше право оставить как у Вас) it because it will be (в будущем же!) useful to me in the future.
3) I enjoy learning, but I get tired after classes (после занятий!), and I feel (я бы сказала have a headache - устойчивое выражение) a headache.
4) And the last thing I would like to tell you about things I hope to achieve in my life, they (иначе предложение потерялось) are: to finish (Вы же дальше везде пишете инфинитив) the University, to have a very successful career, to build the home of my dreams and to find someone in my life to share all that with.
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