Junk food has for a long time been eaten by people. It is considered easy to get and cheap to buy. Lots of commerciasl every day are broadcast on the radio and TV. I strongly believe that advertizing junk and unhealthy food should be prohibited. Doctors say that junk food leads to obesity and serious diseases. Children like it because it looks nice and smells nice. But they are not aware of the danger. Some people may think that such a ban on junk food advertisement is a violation of rights. It also poses danger to freedom of speech and mass media, they may think. But I consider that our nation's health is more important. So we must do all we can to teach people to choose healthy food for themselves and their children. Results of scientific research in this field should be made public. So the people will finally make the right choice!
1. People have been eating fish for thousands of years.
2. The consumption of freshwater fish continuously increases. (it would be better if it was "is continuous increasing" but since you don't have de "is" before the continuously, i think this is the right form )
3. The fishery works with trout since 2005
4. Fish in the Pacific Ocean suffer from parasites
5. Many species of fish are becoming endangered because of the water pollution.
6. A large portion of this practise involves preventive care.
I strongly believe that advertizing junk and unhealthy food should be prohibited. Doctors say that junk food leads to obesity and serious diseases. Children like it because it looks nice and smells nice. But they are not aware of the danger.
Some people may think that such a ban on junk food advertisement is a violation of rights. It also poses danger to freedom of speech and mass media, they may think.
But I consider that our nation's health is more important. So we must do all we can to teach people to choose healthy food for themselves and their children. Results of scientific research in this field should be made public. So the people will finally make the right choice!
1. People have been eating fish for thousands of years.
2. The consumption of freshwater fish continuously increases. (it would be better if it was "is continuous increasing" but since you don't have de "is" before the continuously, i think this is the right form )
3. The fishery works with trout since 2005
4. Fish in the Pacific Ocean suffer from parasites
5. Many species of fish are becoming endangered because of the water pollution.
6. A large portion of this practise involves preventive care.
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