Think about ONE job. Write the description of the job without naming what the job is. Describe the place where the person works, qualities or skills that are required for the job.
You should:
• use present continuous forms to express future;
• link your ideas into paragraphs with three/four basic connectors; • punctuate your work correctly
• link sentences into paragraphs logically using appropriate connectors;
• write with grammar accuracy;
• use appropriate topical vocabulary
expresses ideas clearly;
writes grammatically correct sentences;
uses present continuous forms while writing;
links sentences into paragraphs logically using proper connectors;
uses appropriate topical vocabulary
uses appropriate linking words;
uses punctuation marks correctly
Тут в переводе на Русском языке есть ошибки по моему.
А так в этом теквте котором нужно найти ошибки нет,ошибок.